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it refers to The Tell-Tale Heart there is an audio book version of this story by mr Naleini ! and you Believe your voice pitch is much more better for Gothic story ! . نقل قول:
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---- i hope You Will Be Satisfied by "nemidoni" |
who's mr naleini?! i have heard his nice audio book! hahaha
it was fantastic admin : really ? Have you heard? nice memory, bravo:) |
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I am so sorry dear but i didn't get it ------------------------------------------------- :let's continue The first awful posibility was that the one thing i cared about most in the whole world could have been taken from me by the exact same person that was the last person on this whole planet whom I wanted to have it. After all these years trying to protect it from specially him (or her) even the idea was enough to kill me not to mention the consequenses |
saba gian explain more, i didn't get what happened, may be that's because of panctuation, there is no . or , in ur text |
oh ok I'm depressed now, nobody liked it actually it was something like Edgar Allan poe's stories again as Koorosh mentioned forget it now, maybe it can be used later on dear mehregan I think it's turning into a psychological confession, maybe the thing which he's talking about is not a physical object but an illusion but I'll wait for saba to give you her own answer :) |
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Ii've never read any of his works or I would have got what u meant I didn't say i didn't like it i just didn't get it I didn't know if it was to be the rest of the story or sth of ur own But I do believe that Chains Take away the resposibilities and aside from the fact that u won't be able to do any thing, you'd still be happy that u wont let anybody (even urself) down Oh no! wait a min! !It was the story OK!it's cool! it looks like after the whole ups and downs in the future of the story the narrator is still alive I like that!At least we know that he(or she) is gonna make it through Mine is a little dark again I'm waiting for that secret u mentioned :we'll continue yours ---------------------------------------------------------- And the whole thing is even more chalenging when u've got a to be told story a story that u feel how it worked for u every single morning how it changed u and other peoples opinion about u -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Guys i want this to be like the main character has exprienced sth simple yet extraordianry,that has changed alot of things about him so maybe it could be a breath of fresh air to the ones who may read it A Simple Real Life Story --------------------------------------------- ?so what do u say |
I'm a little confused now Saba there are two lines one is what you said about the thing that had been taken away from the guy, and the other line repeats how it changed his life after mehregan's sentence which says I could sense things and explains how, there must come a sentence related to the robbery : |
Ok! you know whAt guys?We are all confused!And this whole confusion thing will go on unless we figure sth out for it! What about the role thing we talked about?This is confusing cuz all of us playing the being the narrator we should think of a general plot and then expand it,elaborate it, like cooardinating one another! ?what say u |
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I agree. we need to make up a plot first. these kind of theme-based, psychological stories are very subjective, so it's almost impossible to expand it in a way to satisfy everyone stream of consciousness does not accept pause well...let's go on in this way the guy wakes up wondering why he feels so different that day something must have happened, for example a thing had been taken away from him, or something/someone had entered his room |
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That's good He could have also felt like something is gonna happen that !day,something that will change his life forever now the Question is WHO IS GONNA PLAY HIS CHARACTER?I mean who is gonna be who? I think u R better that us, at least that me !SO u'd better be him or wait a min,HER |
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