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The Story of PCcity
Hellow dear ladies and gentelmen:53: the purpose of founding this topic is to improve our knowledge in english by playing an interesting game ! hope u like it ! what is the role ? nothing, just say a sentence (even more!) related to the last one, inorder to make a story! a long one ;) waiting for u all :53: |
as my dear friend Saba started the game ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Here we go :):21:There was one and there wasn't one (it was redicules! I know) !The Room was a complete mess |
i have no idea what to do !suddenly i see a pofaknamaki on the table {شیت شدن} |
Thanks bigabng that POFAKNAMKI of yours will definitly get us the academy award for best original screenplay --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- We Are gonna need someone as the narrator who's usually got the main part but any way....here I go --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The headache was unbearable, and the fact that i didn't know why i had it,made things even worse |
Thank You for founding this topic ! I guessed this topic is about " How did you find PCCity" :p نقل قول:
when i read this i remembered this short story The last man on Earth sat alone in a room. There was a knock on the door آخرین انسان زمین تنها در اتاقش نشسته بود که ناگهان در زدند!!؟ کوتاهترین داستان ترسناک تنها 12 کلمه "Knock", written by Fredric Brown, is a science fiction short story that starts with a description of "a sweet little horror story that is only two sentences long." It then goes on to elaborate on those two sentences and build a more complete plot around them:41: some time later Ron Smith reduced one character and changed it to: The last man on Earth sat alone in a room. There was a lock on the door . |
seriesly i want to make an attention for this topic and i just dont want to make joke to laugh now you say this i feel very awful:o _:2: beside saba baran 90 you are such a kill......joy you kill my joyness you kill my Nature of art ! you kill my artistery i dont forgive you for this crime and just to know i wrote setayesh screenplay for channel 3 i dont know why , when iranian people try to make an story ,it is dark ? we cant make a good story with happy feeling and happy ending . why we Insiste on to make a dark story like:((there is mess every where or i have a headache and made things even worse ))always a true story is not the dark story there is always good and bad there are equal ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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! Sorry but i actually want this thing to work out !But i have to admit it was funny !And about Setayesh, I gotta say that i believe u نقل قول:
! Actually it could be really funny ?have u watched the movie called Hangover the movie is known to be one of the funniest comedies in the US!And the main part of the story starts just the same way as we started ours :WE could start with this When i woke up that day I thought it was gonna be just a regular day like all the previous ones. But if I had the slightest idea of what that day was gonna be like , I would have defenitly changed my mind |
Hmmm I was thinking suddenly a nice plot emerged from a crappy idea haha I've written this much of it, I'll keep it a secret with Saba if it sounds good they should have chained me. when you're chained you easily feel repressed. you start to blame others.you start to think you would be better off without them and you don't feel guilty but when you're literally free, you start to blame yourself for letting them down, and that my friend is worse...too damn worse! p.s so?! :D |
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oops! I didn't see this part well let's continue: someone or something had broken into my apartment.you wouldn't need to be a genius to know this... I could sense it. you know I can sense anything, since I was a kid ... p.s I'll give you a clue think of Edgar Allan Poe stories ;) -------- admin : i know what you say Khatoooon:65: ! |
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found means establish do u like to know how did i find PCCty? i'll write in the proper topic of: انگیزه شما از عضویت توی فروم چی بوده! i like to say that now i'm downloading ur signature! ofcourse there is a topic in the english part, haven't U C that still? short stories. نقل قول:
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since i was a kid.... i can remember everything in details. don't believe? ask my mom, she will tell u how i could find lost things by pointing to their place when i was 2! she will tell u how i could feel pepol's feeling around me when i was 4! sometimes i think i am in relation with ultra creatures and they tell me waht's happening around! p.s: now, someone's needed to tell us what suddenly came into the room!!!!! |
i dont want to send spam in your topic ! but you force me ! نقل قول:
it refers to The Tell-Tale Heart there is an audio book version of this story by mr Naleini ! and you Believe your voice pitch is much more better for Gothic story ! . نقل قول:
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---- i hope You Will Be Satisfied by "nemidoni" |
who's mr naleini?! i have heard his nice audio book! hahaha
it was fantastic admin : really ? Have you heard? nice memory, bravo:) |
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I am so sorry dear but i didn't get it ------------------------------------------------- :let's continue The first awful posibility was that the one thing i cared about most in the whole world could have been taken from me by the exact same person that was the last person on this whole planet whom I wanted to have it. After all these years trying to protect it from specially him (or her) even the idea was enough to kill me not to mention the consequenses |
saba gian explain more, i didn't get what happened, may be that's because of panctuation, there is no . or , in ur text |
oh ok I'm depressed now, nobody liked it actually it was something like Edgar Allan poe's stories again as Koorosh mentioned forget it now, maybe it can be used later on dear mehregan I think it's turning into a psychological confession, maybe the thing which he's talking about is not a physical object but an illusion but I'll wait for saba to give you her own answer :) |
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Ii've never read any of his works or I would have got what u meant I didn't say i didn't like it i just didn't get it I didn't know if it was to be the rest of the story or sth of ur own But I do believe that Chains Take away the resposibilities and aside from the fact that u won't be able to do any thing, you'd still be happy that u wont let anybody (even urself) down Oh no! wait a min! !It was the story OK!it's cool! it looks like after the whole ups and downs in the future of the story the narrator is still alive I like that!At least we know that he(or she) is gonna make it through Mine is a little dark again I'm waiting for that secret u mentioned :we'll continue yours ---------------------------------------------------------- And the whole thing is even more chalenging when u've got a to be told story a story that u feel how it worked for u every single morning how it changed u and other peoples opinion about u -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Guys i want this to be like the main character has exprienced sth simple yet extraordianry,that has changed alot of things about him so maybe it could be a breath of fresh air to the ones who may read it A Simple Real Life Story --------------------------------------------- ?so what do u say |
I'm a little confused now Saba there are two lines one is what you said about the thing that had been taken away from the guy, and the other line repeats how it changed his life after mehregan's sentence which says I could sense things and explains how, there must come a sentence related to the robbery : |
Ok! you know whAt guys?We are all confused!And this whole confusion thing will go on unless we figure sth out for it! What about the role thing we talked about?This is confusing cuz all of us playing the being the narrator we should think of a general plot and then expand it,elaborate it, like cooardinating one another! ?what say u |
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I agree. we need to make up a plot first. these kind of theme-based, psychological stories are very subjective, so it's almost impossible to expand it in a way to satisfy everyone stream of consciousness does not accept pause well...let's go on in this way the guy wakes up wondering why he feels so different that day something must have happened, for example a thing had been taken away from him, or something/someone had entered his room |
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That's good He could have also felt like something is gonna happen that !day,something that will change his life forever now the Question is WHO IS GONNA PLAY HIS CHARACTER?I mean who is gonna be who? I think u R better that us, at least that me !SO u'd better be him or wait a min,HER |
i play this charecter if you want me to tell my real story actually in real life i lose some thing and it changed my life maybe forever i am wondering after lots of time the story is not written whats the problem?is this a business Contract?some one tell something and then the other one continue it .we are just wasting time with (how we start or how we continue!) when i say without me you cant make a story you dont believe seriesly say something burn the story begin just tell the story thats it |
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! Your confidence is really sth to appreciate I think it'll be cool though, I mean you are a guy and we will definitly have a part for a guy in a story,For AGHA DOZDE :24:;)how about that? But seriously I personaly would appreciate your contribution ?Can u give us a clue about your story I really want this to be life-changing story, so yours will probably be great. But I want one of the leading roles |
ok I give you a clue it is not like my real story but maybe there is some thing that is refer to my life story you have no idea this agha dozde is not the bad guy in our socity today.bad guys dont have any name there names like m.kh.b(mohsen khatar va bacheha !) |
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! Wow!I have to admit that you are good!Now that's how my imagination can think of it: A Real Thriller My Mind goes on like this:I like that story!You Are going to find out about your real family and you R gonna go through a very rough time dealing with secrets you find out one after another, and there are gonna be friends of yours helping u with it. Family secrets could be things that each photograph of your album (scrapbook I guess)indirectly represents For example your father could have actually been a friend of your biological father but there is a dark secret between them ........ !God! I can think of so many posibilities !Great one ! A REAL BIG BANG --------------------------------------------------------------------------- ?Now who am i gonna be?Seriously!Who is each one of us gonna be |
well i have a suggestion for you maybe you don't like that but that's my suggestion and now thats my suggest for your character : you are a Rough women you are a member of an agency that kill people for purpose . no body knows that you employee from that agent and you dont work just for money you work for something that you really believe and you are married you have child but some day if you have to get rid of them(child and husband) you will kill them with no kind of involving in such kind of emotion things your job is to make sure that idon't understand any thing about my identity and if i understand you are going to kill me .it is very important (i don,t know what do you want , you want to be killed in the middle of story or exist from the begging to the end )and you know thats only a suggest you can choose who you wana be !!ok i am talking too much again |
?Are You mocking me ?Do I Seem that cruel to you ?Any way...where is every body {قیژه}MEregan{قیژه}Khatun I can take that part but i dont want to have kids,Cuz then the character will be so much older than me,she will be far away from me and i won't be able to understand her |
why i should mocking you? of cource i am not i see jhooker in your avatar and suddenly this idea comes in thats only a suggest you do not seems cruel to me ! why you hit me! this is a principle that people that have'nt any exprience in some situation they can act better on that like i can act like a killer but i am so kind !beilive me beside thats a questions to me why they are not exist maybe i am Annoying them damn i know i shoulde'nt say that poofak namaki it ruined every thing.pooof :confused: |
Hey hey calm down!That pofaknamaki was just a joke and we all got it,I'll probably meet mehregan Saturday and i wil ask her about that,or i may even text her tomorrow I dont know why i felt like you mocked me,And i promis I'm never gonna hit you again,cuz i don't want to :d !OK then,Nice suggestion !fine with me Actually Eversince I've watched Heath Ledger Playing The Joker in the movie called The Dark Knight I like evil characters I can be her, But i like her to have a complicated personality ?How do you think we should start ?What do you think the first part has got to be |
the first part start from street I like flash back stories . the car has accident by me . it is not huge I am wainting for police the man after me is just shouting and I don’t want to here any word that comes from his mouth . I am thinking about a good answer to my boss about being late . now the street is crowde all peopel see us like that they are seeing aliens . I am sooo tierd I don’t know why but I feel my head is so heavy suddenly my mobile phone ringing I love it helps me to forget this place just for a moment and take my control back I push the button and answer the phone . my uncle calls me he asked about my health and his sound is Concerned . always when some thing happen my uncle calls me I don't know how he got my situation ………… |
:Two Questions ?A.have u figured what the name of the characters are gonna be ?B.Is the story happening in Iran !I mean we Are writing English so,Maybe we need English names ?What do you think Hey and by the way, since the others are not here for now, I can be you uncle at this part |
well thats my choice how about iraninan names ha !! we are imagining and any thing could happen ! you are girl you can choose name better than me i am a guy who lost his identity !and you are my uncle in iran ? let me think about that alright well iran is better because we know some thing about our socity at least i will continue the story without any name and you can choose a name ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- i am finish talking to my uncle . the police has not come yet the cars stocks in the street the man has tired from shouting he is tired like me he grab his head by his hands ....................... at last the police has come.they are talking to me and him and i do Dispute. i should pay the Fine and Damage my car crashed they grab my car to the garage all things around me is going down i get a taxi to my work place i go upstairs to go to my office i found all the doors closed . suddenly i remmeber there was a ceremony on that day and because of it office has closed .i sit in the corridor and stare to the roof. my eyes felt sleepy ......................... i sleep ................ everywhere is white and clean there is a flower in the middle i can hear a women sound she is mad maybe angry i see my uncle he is sad my shoulder i feel like its burning nooooooooooo.... a servant of company moving my shoulder wake up ... are you good wake up |
But I personaly think that it shouldn't be in Iran ?but if it is, then how about we call u Sina !that is the first name that came into my mind :I'm callin' and u pick up the phone ?hey man how are u doing ?U OK?Haven't heard of u in while!Where are u |
well thats agood name i love sina! well don't foget that women , you act two personality ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- suddenly my mobile ringing again that's may uncle he is worried about me again hey man how are you doin havent heard of you in while where are you".a": uncle isaid don't call me again you act like that i am a kid " i am in my office i said they grab my car yessssssss ................. no i dont want any help there is no need to help i can afford that.................what are you talking about? uncle i gotta go .................women what women ........no i said i am good...........ok i will come for dinner alright ........................ if you want to continue the conversation you can . |
uncle isaid don't call me again you act like that i am a kid i am in my office !Jsut felt worried about you !It has nothing to do with me feelin' that you R a kid!Cuz u Rn't !u R a grown up man .........but i said they grab my car What?Your car? yessssssss You hurt?Need any help? no i dont want any help there is no need to help i can afford that There's been an emergecy about your parents, I need to meet you now! ?what are you talking about? what emergency?They OK?Allo !Just I gotta see u now Fine I'll be there Bye Bye ------------------------------------------------------------- I changed yours a little and i colored up mine with red Hope u like it from now on you say yours and i answer mine with red Or if i said first you answer with blue or whatever color u like |
well I have no I idea what my uncle want to say to me but since I was a kid he didn't talk about my parents I am dead curios about the things he said on the phone I say goodbye to the servant and I go to get a taxi the city is always crowde what these people want I see my watch its 2 pm the sun light is burning I arrived to my uncle house I pay the taxi driver and then I push the interphone my uncle open the door his house is old and I think its belong to 1340 shamsi I love that house it reminds me the past when I was a kid and I play in yard there is a tiny small pool in the middle of the yard I always make my self wet with that by jumping in it. in falls and in springs the trees of my uncle house is soo beautiful . shortly I love this place it is warm, it is my sweet home uncle stand in the incoming door he waits for me after he see me for a moment he smiles then he is in that mood befor he smiles . he hug me I am now concerned about him what is this kind of behave mean maybe he is going to die maybe he had cancer and he didn't told there is many thing that he doesn't told me …. what am I saying I talk like crazy people . I sit on the coach …. |
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maryam is not prepred for that and actually she never think that she is gonna pregnant after 3 month she can,t control her hunger and hide it . farhad think that maybe because she is nervous and frightend she eat more food than him. but showing her status tell some thing else to farhad "your wife is sick or she had a secret that didn,t tell you" finally after 3 week farhad understand the truth . they are fighting farhad threaten mryam that if she don’t kill the baby he will do that before birth or after birth of child . maryam is sooooooooo scared she didn,t had any one to help her . at one morning she decide to run from every thing from her past from what ever she had and from his husband the man that she loves him like no one . she grab her bag and she ran . she had no idea what to do if she goes to general places or get an apartment in known places . the security guys track her and found her . maryam decide to go to the downtown of the city and find a place that not simply able to found . she found an old house that had one owner .an old women she had no son and daughter she lived by her self . maryam decide to go in that home …………… |
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