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nice text
nice essay
nice topic
nice Audrey!

you know, as you write by yourself here in this part and as i read your texts, it helps me improve my knowledge and to be familiar with different methods of writing, grammer points and other tips, thank you so much.

i had a quick glance at your text, before mentioning to my ideas about the subject (why school?) i would like to
point some tips!

one is that please use the enter key inorder to make your post easier to read, you know the page is too wide and reading looks a bit hard!

next please use some images about your title, it makes the post more attractive.

at last please use a biiger font, it would be better.

what do you think?

now my opinon:

i think the system of education plays an important role in the proccess of studying. "educaton is not an end, it is a mean to an end" what does it mean? it means that : studying itself is not important, but the end, the gole that is reached by studying is the most important factor.

how to rech to that gole?

by choosing an acceptable system of education, which can bring us goyful, attracton to continue our studies, and also it should be changable.

i think the problem we face in our system of education nowadays, reffers to this factor: we do not have an attractive system. we should seek for a better onr inorder not to waste our lves behnd the desks.