بیا تو انگلیسی بنویس! هرچی بلدی! - ! English Guys! Come Here

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hi, bigbang gian! or i should better say mamad jon as saba said
you know guy, as long as i have come to this topic, my talent at speaking in english has been reduced! do you know why? because of reading your posts, full of grammatical mistakes, sorry for saying that, but have to give you some advise: hesitate in what you write grammatically, for example know the differences between leaning and teaching, then you should notice at each sentence, they all must have one subject and one verb, notice to the tenses(times) and finally thank you so much for using appropriate slangs and idioms, you are skillful in that aspect.

now, angry?

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then i wanted to talk about the story, why you didn't explain more?

this is the whole story of yours, as i remember:
a boy named sina meets his uncle after a car crash, his uncle live in a beautiful house remembering sina his childhood, after the accident his uncle invites sina tio the home and (as we say in persian "nakeshide o 25!" ) wants to tell sina his most secret life! .... and the real story begins .... sina's parents: simin (as i remember) and farhad were scientists working on inventing a drug for humans' body so that the drug causes the body to be recurred, , in other words this treatment pointed as "cheshme siavash" as mamad said, makes the body to rebuilt itself. after some events (to be honest, i don't remember exactly what were they) simin becomes aware of her baby , sina whom is not still born... farhad asks simin to kill the baby before birth, but simin doesn't accept and runs away from her husband .... ..... then farhad looking for simin in the city .... farshad enters the story (farhad's brother) and they meet an adicted person ..... who is that adicted person and what may take place after all these events are in mamad's mind .....
mamad, what do you think about me summarization?
i hope you like it

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saba, what do you think about the story?

another question: there is an idea about a new topic in the learning foreign languages part of the forum: a topic for writing sentences one after the other so that the next sentence should be started with the last word of the previous one ... got it?

comments . . .

well miss mehregan your summarization is good but some little mistakes in it. like sina,s mother named maryam not simin and the second is farshad is farhad friend not brother of him.
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about the grammar well some mistake is especially not mine it is just made to make you angry miss mehregan like playing with time in my story
if you feel soo bad about that you have one choice
and that one is to kill me
jooooking what i could say about the story i had already said that before<what can i say for now? you that nobody comes i don,t maybe they are involving with their education issues
by the way i have a midterm again in Wednesday and i should study hard but i don,t have any problem to go to the forum
it does,nt take my time soo much
at least some body come and say some thin